Drahl "Brawler" Concept Revisit

A somewhat repainted concept of Drahl "Brawler" from a two-year-old version. Wanted to see if I could solve some of the older problems now that I think that I've improved. I still don't think it's getting there, so C&C are welcome.

Older iterations for anyone interested:
2010 version: front back
2008 version: here
2007 version: here
2007 idea exploration: here